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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

...leapt into eternity....what an ending! I love this....

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Jacob Gauthier's avatar

This was so, so good! I got captured in the story so quickly.

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Kayla’s Mind And Heart's avatar

Beautiful writing! I love it!

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Wow, this was phenomenal, Richard! Your worldbuilding skills continue to absolutely blow my mind. The amount or lore and backstory you established here was stunning, but as always, it never came at the cost of the story's pacing or flow.

Thank you so much for checking out the first Power Up Prompt! I'll be sure to give this story a shout out on the next episode of my podcast.

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