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Renée Lucia's avatar

Casthalla feels genuinely inhabited as a character, which is probably why the ending works as well as it does.

Richard Pack's avatar

I was worried how she'd come across outside of her story, so I'm very glad to hear that!

Renée Lucia's avatar

Even in the quieter moments, she already seemed to exist beyond the scene itself.

Olly von's avatar

This was stupendous I loved it that was genius writing yourself in that way !!

WiseWomanWickedTongue's avatar

Ooh. This is delightfully creepy. I have some characters I've written that I would hate to run into—or maybe not. 🤔

Gregory Blair's avatar

This is fabuous!

Every Root, Every Thorn's avatar

Nice!