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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

I love how this story stands on its own while also connecting to your broader universe. That's something I try to achieve with a lot of my stories as well.

The lack of attachment leading to the characters being named based on their roles was also a stroke of brilliance. It made sense from a narrative standpoint of course, but that approach also made it really easy for me to remember who was who as a reader, and funny enough, still managed to endear me to them.

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The Verdant Butterfly's avatar

I loved this line. it made me giggle. "Not the worst place he’d been for a job, but bottom ten for certain." great story I liked that way you used names to show attachment, no names no attachments. until the end.

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